I was not in class Thursday so I did not write a sports story. After reading my email, I still was not sure exactly what our assignment was and if we were to cover a specific football game. Therefore, I do not have a story to revise. However, after class today there are some mistakes I'm sure I would have made.
1. I would have to correct my dateline. I understand now a dateline means you wrote the story from that location.
2. I would probably have to correct the time element and move it closer to the verb.
3. I would probably have spelling errors to look up and correct.
4. I know I would have said "their" referring to East Carolina University
I am sure there would have been several more mistakes too.
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